Sunday, May 17, 2009

Sunday Scribblings #163 -- Disconnected

This week's Sunday Scribblings prompt is disconnected

I awaken
disconnected
from the outside world

My mind
unfettered
from temporal things

I call
You answer

We walk together
in the secret garden
of my soul

My spirit
naked and unashamed
before You

Your arms
Strong and Mighty
around me

I bask
in Your love

You smile
at my innocence

I emerge
strengthened, refreshed...
Connected
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8 comments:

  1. Americanising DesiMay 17, 2009 at 10:24 AM

    i love the way you end it!


    :)

    Happy SS
    http://whenhekissesher.wordpress.com/2009/05/16/disconnected/

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  2. A Girl Named MeMay 17, 2009 at 1:19 PM

    Turning disconnection into connection - and what a way to do it, too! xoxo

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  3. PamMay 17, 2009 at 6:33 PM

    This poem mirrors a class discussion at church today about detachment and attachment and how to connect with God. Nicely done.

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  4. RoanMay 17, 2009 at 8:41 PM

    That was awesome!

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  5. Margaret PangertMay 18, 2009 at 9:09 PM

    That was beautiful, Marguerite! Love changes so much in our lives: brings connectedness-confidence-happiness-joy-energy. I really love this poem.

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  6. floretaMay 19, 2009 at 2:02 AM

    very nicely worded! love the secret garden bit.

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  7. AnonymousMay 19, 2009 at 3:59 AM

    How brilliant, to turn disconnected full circle...
    very imaginative...:-)

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  8. Samantha ~ Holly and Zac ~May 19, 2009 at 4:40 PM

    Another lovely poem. :-)

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